My Very First Map

[D0rit0hs]

Hellooo there well this is my first map i hope you guys like it rate/hate or leave a coment :]




Cave Map


http://i716.photobucket.com/albums/ww169/Maurinho_2009/CAVE.jpg


Whee so thas all this was my very first map enjoy :D Thnx

[Cowdude]

what did you take the picture with?
the bridge is floating
tdm or assault?

[Guy]

You dont have to add the sky looks weird when you do.
Also very plain.
Pointless artifact in bottom conner
Pointless destructive boxes
Boring map too me -.-
But nice try for first map :D

[Snoopy]

OK for a first.

-Bad Look, don't put sky.

-unnecessary block in the top left.

2\5

[Tylord]

you should put gaps in the bridge, otherwise theres no point in having the water under the bridge because everyone is going to use the bridge instead of going under

[KiteRider]

Pointless destructive boxes


...Those are F boxes, I'm guessing. Destructibles would have numbers on them.

1.5/5
-Well, you're paying attention to detail, I will give you that, but you can also use the backgrounds, rather than background tiles(3 = Night, 4 = Jungle, etc). Try to avoid using Outside tiles altogether, Jungle can stand alone as the main tileset.
-Spawns excessively rape-able.
-Yay for completely random flying boxes in upper right/left.
-Refill in center screen should be removed.
-You've covered both extremes of ehk gameplay: Stairy and flat.
-Random Artifact is random
-Tile Flow, eh.
-Ladders just at the edge of a map, ehk. Try to have them about 2+ spaces in.

For a first, I'd say above average, but at least its a lot better than some people could do ^.^