My 1st Map

[Wolfz]

Blood Jungle
[1x1]
Game: TDM

I made this very first map.. i read the map making guide.. I hope this would be better if u guys suggest..
Alright here's the map..

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn164/Killstephen/BloodJungle.jpg


Blood Jungle V2

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn164/Killstephen/BloodJunglev2.jpg

Updates..

- Minimize top spawn camping and also at the bottom
-Bottom spawns are now accesible. Upper spawns are still not..
-I decreased the ladders length

Blood Jungle V3 (With Canopy)

Updates..
- New Refill Placement
-Canopy Tileset

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn164/Killstephen/BloodJungleV3.jpg

Blood Jungle V4

Updates..
-Upper Spawns is now accesible..
-No more water its changed to grass..
-No more bush near the top spawn.. its now already at the bottom spawn

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn164/Killstephen/BloodJungleV4.jpg

Blood Jungle V5
Updates..
-No more paralel ladders..
-Not so tight anymore
- Upper spawns is not accessible anymore..
-Minimize spawn camping on upper spawns..
-Only one spawns to minimize lag

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn164/Killstephen/BloodJungleV5.jpg

Any Suggestions..?
Credits for Brandon0104 and Cowdude

[L]

Hm, this map is pretty neat, and could be made a lot better.

-Spawns are way to close.
-It's tight in a few key points in this map. The points where it is, it shouldn't be.
-ladder glitch. <--Disregard that, I made a mistake. (No ladder glitch)

I have no suggestions.

1-to-2/5 at first glance. Re-modify it, and my rating would definitely increase.

[Wolfz]

Whats the ladder glitch? so i can fix it..

[Brandon0104]

Hmm 1x1's are hard to make good. I suggest trying to
find better spawn and refil placement. Gameplay doesn't
look that great. Try not to make it so the trees cut off or
go into each other O_O. Maybe you should try adding
canopy to it.

Better then alot of firsts.

1.5/5

[Wolfz]

Hmm 1x1's are hard to make good. I suggest trying to
find better spawn and refil placement. Gameplay doesn't
look that great. Try not to make it so the trees cut off or
go into each other O_O. Maybe you should try adding
canopy to it.





Ok I'm on it Brandon.. Im gonna check out canopy tile set

Now tell me what you think?

[L]

This is my rating of map v3

**Flaws**

-Very tight
-Gameplay is fixed in certain spots

**Side Note**

Gameplay means everything, meaning, if it's tight, you're going to have some bad gameplay. Open it up more, and I would suggest crossing the spawns. My rating may still be the same because of the gameplay, but the overall percent went up a tad.

**Rating**

Out of Five: 1/5

Percentage: 33%


jfella91: I know 20% is 1/5, but id rather post a rating out of 5 and a percentage of where it is, rather then like, 1.63/5. If you get what I'm trying to say, lol.

It's like, showing how close it is to being the next level up. It's almost 2/5, but it's not quite there yet? I don't like rounding :P

[jfella91]

This is my rating of map v3

**Flaws**

-Very tight
-Gameplay is fixed in certain spots

**Side Note**

Gameplay means everything, meaning, if it's tight, you're going to have some bad gameplay. Open it up more, and I would suggest crossing the spawns. My rating may still be the same because of the gameplay, but the overall percent went up a tad.

**Rating**

Out of Five: 1/5

Percentage: 33%

Umm.. how do you get 33% out of 1/5 lol :p

[Wolfz]

Hey Guys i got an idea.. Post your suggestions Here.. then ill make a map that have ur suggestions like not to make it tight..

So.. Any Suggestions..?

[Cowdude]

Umm.. how do you get 33% out of 1/5 lol :p

Well techinically.
33% isn't quite 2/5 cuz thats 40%
but rounding would be better

[jfella91]

Well techinically.
33% isn't quite 2/5 cuz thats 40%
but rounding would be better

Oh as opposed to putting decimals I get it

[Cowdude]

Oh as opposed to putting decimals I get it
Hehe yup .

[Villyer]

I suggest moving up the platforms the spawns are on and the platform in the middle up one space. Get rid of the red stuff hanging down from nothing on the top of the screen.

Gameplay is really simple.

It looks fine, but when i think about how it would be to play, its boring.


2/5