[WIP]First Sprite-LooZr66

[LooZr66]

D:

First ever attempt. Idk. Any tips?

http://i44.tinypic.com/35cel9v.png

[Ravin]

Flow is messed up

<--- Sprite flows that way...
Pentooling + BG flows that way --->

Like the smudging. Not a fan of the wierd BG behind Storm or the way that the pentooling meets.

Keep at it. You'll get there eventually.

[MasterKillerGOD]

Its too big, spirtes look better in small tags. And the render scares me. D:

[LooZr66]

Flow is messed up

<--- Sprite flows that way...
Pentooling + BG flows that way --->

Like the smudging. Not a fan of the wierd BG behind Storm or the way that the pentooling meets.

Keep at it. You'll get there eventually.

D:

Wow. I actually reversed the way of that layer. Rawr.
I'm still working on it though.

[Lampy]

Well the background and the effects are good.

[LooZr66]

Well the background and the effects are good.

Oh gtfo. Don't tell me what's good. Tell me what to improve.

[Ezio]

make the sprite softer and less sharp.

Also practice smudging like below.

http://i41.tinypic.com/mhwpi0.jpg

[LooZr66]

make the sprite softer and less sharp.

Also practice smudging like below.

http://i41.tinypic.com/mhwpi0.jpg

Eh, I might just use that.

Well...I don't suggest smudging like that but...

W/e...

Anyways flow is fine imo...

Work on blending and effects first...

I'm still trying D:

[Ezio]

smudging is what makes skys wierd :cool: super cool :cool:

[PKUD3AD]

Flow is not even there, needs blending. I like the colors though

[LooZr66]

Flow is not even there, needs blending. I like the colors though

Oh thanks you for telling me everything the last 3 people said. Gtfo with the spam.

MC, if I pm you the .xcf can you see if what I have now is good? I don't want to post it yet.

[Janxa]

hey use this! or else!

http://i43.tinypic.com/fbx3lv.jpg