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Eiliosdraye
03-05-2009, 12:58 PM
Leir considered his predicament. He was stuck on Genesis, the whole new planet, one with magic, one like home. If only he had his Mana back, he might stand a fighting chance. He took the thought out of his head, as he clearly needed to concentrate as he was sure he was about to die.


This e-book is a series I made up just for Pawngame. Well, book 10-20. Book 10 was a revamp, but it's going to do pretty good.





Some backstory: Leir found a way to make a new planet for the Wastelanders to live in, but it turns out that was the Vyramp HQ, so he is on a giant planet filled with homicidal monsters.




More to come.

Calisniper13
03-05-2009, 07:09 PM
If this is #10 where are 1-9?

Eiliosdraye
03-05-2009, 07:18 PM
If this is #10 where are 1-9?
Good question: They sucked. Lolol, I hated them. The backstory was great, but the characters were... lolfail.


It's hard to explain, but i'll try. In book 10, we introduce my favourite Chronicles character of all time(trumping Kail's three year reign), the criminal mastermind Nova. Nova is an immigrant of a surviving tribe fending off the Vyramps home planet, so she has tactics beyond anything ever imagined by the Wastelanders(You try holing yourself up in a planet filled with monsters that can cut steel).

But then what happens is Nova tries to take over this planet, and nearly suceeds. Until of course Leir runs a massive covert campaign to take out the giant lead, and book 10-25 is all about Leir trying to take down the Novan Empire which is taking over all civilised government. However, they're both tactile geniuses, making the story really interesting as you get to find out all of the different traps and maneuvers they use.

Kaspersky
03-05-2009, 09:08 PM
He decided it'd be better to skip the introduction, it being terrible, and moving on the to the worst part of the story to keep the others thinking it's actually worth reading.