marion

[SiCILIAN]

i think i nailed this

http://i39.tinypic.com/kaqo1z.png

[WolfHowlz]

Meh. Too much white. Text is too close and pink really doesn't help with the manliness statement that you're proposing.

[Skuhl]

its good, but as wolf said too much white and text doesnt look good. now if the text had some texture on it that made it blend with the background it might work

[maggerz]

Meh. Too much white. Text is too close and pink really doesn't help with the manliness statement that you're proposing.

That's what she said (literally)

That green thing is got to go, so does the text.

You did not nail this.