Tom's Shack-first map

[cookies101]

Ok i was geting into this map making and i decided to make a map here is what i came up with
http://i39.tinypic.com/5n7seo.jpg
rate/hate dont hate :)
->code
Team Deathmatch&toms shack&1&16&22&28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28,28 ,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,28,28,2 ,3,73,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,73,3,1,28,28,74,74,7 3,78,73,78,78,78,78,73,78,73,74,74,28,28,17,17,73, 78,73,65,78,78,65,73,78,73,17,17,28,28,17,17,73,78 ,73,74,74,74,74,73,78,73,17,17,28,74,74,74,73,78,7 3,78,78,78,78,73,78,73,74,74,74,78,78,78,73,78,73, 78,78,78,78,73,78,73,78,78,78,78,78,78,73,78,73,78 ,64,28,78,73,78,73,78,78,78,73,78,78,73,78,73,64,2 9,64,30,73,78,73,78,78,73,73,74,74,74,74,74,74,74, 74,74,74,74,74,74,74,73,73,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78 ,78,78,78,78,78,78,73,73,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,78,7 8,78,78,78,78,78,73,73,78,78,78,78,78,73,78,78,73, 78,78,78,78,78,73,73,78,78,78,78,78,73,74,74,73,78 ,78,78,78,78,73,73,78,65,3,78,65,73,78,78,73,65,78 ,3,65,78,73,73,74,65,74,74,65,73,78,78,73,65,74,74 ,65,74,73,73,78,78,78,78,1,73,74,74,73,2,78,78,78, 78,73,73,78,78,28,28,17,73,78,78,73,17,28,28,78,78 ,73,73,78,78,17,28,17,73,78,78,73,17,28,17,78,78,7 3,73,78,78,28,28,15,73,78,78,73,15,28,28,78,78,73, 73,78,64,78,78,17,73,78,78,73,17,78,78,64,78,73
updated it new code make screen shot someone please.
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[Hurrikhayne11]

If you can post the correct code, I'll get the screenshot for you.

[cookies101]

try now please :) ty hurri :P just post in first post so you dont double post
opps i double posted didnt i?

[Calisniper13]

If you can post the correct code, I'll get the screenshot for you.

It was the right code? NubNubNub

Here:
http://i39.tinypic.com/5n7seo.jpg

Long Ladder are fail.
Spawn on bottom need to be changed
Move the refills on top
Top is flat
Are there any F boxes? >_>

1/5 :(

[cookies101]

arrow boxs = F
X boxes=CF
there you go and where to find spaces for spawns
and where?
what should i do to top?
where to put the refils on top?

[xXsoYsoYsoYXx]

Crouches at bottom.
Top is flat.
Move the refills to like the bottom of the top O_o.
2/5

[DS]

Since it's your first map...
-Refills are in a bad place
-Never make long ladders
-Really flat on top except the middle
Overall C- 2/5

[Brandon0104]

Did you rate your own map!? Don't do that...

[Sinful]

Really, if you make your "First" map. Dont put it into submissions, last I checked (Awhile ago) this was submitting maps to be serverd :\

If its your first, put it in main part. and ask for tips and such.


To screenshot: 1. Press screenshot whilst looking at the map from map editor view(next to f12) then open microsoft paint. If you have mac then that sucks. press "ctrl+v" while having microsoft paint open. then get a photobucket account (its better then imageshack ect) and upload it. Pretty simple.

Version 2: Buy a kodak camera, aim at computer screen. use usb cord and go to my computer/removable disk (or usb cord connection thing) then take those images and put them here.

If you actually do number 2, Ill laugh at you.