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Jenoveil

01-31-2009, 07:41 PM

Umm...my first attempt at a real game map. Take a look, advice/criticism welcomed, and please rate.

EDIT: Also, I need some advice and constructive criticism on the appearance, any help with that is greatly appreciated ^^

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c316/ryudragonking93/mapscreenie4.jpg

Try it out if you like:

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AkiroZoku

01-31-2009, 07:49 PM

-Remove Crouch
-Refill is ok ( i guess )
-Some what Game Play
-I see camping Spots
-Kinda Plain

2/5

KiteRider

01-31-2009, 07:50 PM

For a first map, that's pretty damn good
2/5
- Middle Screen: Easy Ladder Camp + Refill >.<
- Bottom Screen: Easy camp, stand, head behind block and shoot.
- Move refills farther apart, or take one or two out.

Still, nice.
Keep at it.

EDIT :D...
Appearance:
Generally, use a variety of tiles, from tilesets that fit together well. (I believe this is mentioned here (http://pawngame.com/forum/showthread.php?t=15661), under Correspondence)

However, space, castle, and urban fit together well. Put a few windows into the open areas, some supports, and it won't look so bleak.
Btw, its probably better not to use the blue background, rather the backgrounds.

Jenoveil

01-31-2009, 07:52 PM

For a first map, that's pretty damn good
2/5
- Middle Screen: Easy Ladder Camp + Refill >.<
- Bottom Screen: Easy camp, stand, head behind block and shoot.
- Move refills farther apart, or take one or two out.

Still, nice.
Keep at it.

Thanks ^^ Um, I'll see about fixing those. I was hoping for some advice regarding the appearance of the map as well, as I know it's rather ugly. T_T

harryhas2424

01-31-2009, 07:53 PM

itz alrit i mean i cant speak i make crappy maps for u i wud say a 3/5 ur map compared to mine 100/100

FusiouS

01-31-2009, 08:00 PM

Jenoveil

01-31-2009, 08:06 PM

Well that is really nice for a first map =]
remove that crouch. And on the left side in the middle screen making so they can go over it put a ladder there.

The thing I am talking about looks like this:
|-|-
|-|--
|-|---

Out a ladder as I have shown it will make it fun gameplay =]

FrozensRating:3/5

Still not following....xD Any way you can describe that to me in-game? I would get a better idea. Btw, I have removed the crouch, moved the refill around a bit, edited here and there. Will edit in a new screenshot in a moment. :)

jack98

01-31-2009, 08:07 PM

i love the top where arti is because thats good to defend your self lol

Hamo

01-31-2009, 11:17 PM

I think that is a farley good map. Just add another red spawn and try add in more then just the castle tile set.

SmoothCopyCat

02-01-2009, 12:40 AM

flat.
looooooong path to the arti.
bad refills.
iffy game play..
1/5
but for a first map..
= bonus point.
cause its good for a first.
2/5

xXsoYsoYsoYXx

02-01-2009, 02:10 AM

U changed alot of it since you last showed me it :], add a block tto covwr the holes right from blue spawn. 2.50/5

Jenoveil

02-01-2009, 10:46 AM

flat.
looooooong path to the arti.
bad refills.
iffy game play..
1/5
but for a first map..
= bonus point.
cause its good for a first.
2/5

Thank you ^^ Any suggestions on how to make it better?

U changed alot of it since you last showed me it :], add a block tto covwr the holes right from blue spawn. 2.50/5

Which spawn are you talking about?

Also, I'm still taking suggestions on what tiles I should use for appearance, because I know (and you don't needa tell me) it looks pretty ugly. :(

HyDr0gEnIuM

02-01-2009, 11:13 AM

Make more refills dude : D

Cowdude

02-01-2009, 05:36 PM

Maybe add some boxes/supports
A lot of jumping =o

Brandon0104

02-01-2009, 11:13 PM

I rate this map 1.75/5.
I really don't like how theres no gameplay and the blue can camp like crzy threw out the whole map.

xXsoYsoYsoYXx

02-01-2009, 11:36 PM

Thank you ^^ Any suggestions on how to make it better?

Which spawn are you talking about?

Also, I'm still taking suggestions on what tiles I should use for appearance, because I know (and you don't needa tell me) it looks pretty ugly. :(

Sorry, that post I typed up on my PSP.
Anyway, the bottom blue spawn to the >> Next to the ladder..
Fill in the spot with a castle block